Revised Final English Essay and Complete Discussion Post

ASSIGNMENT: REVISE PERSONAL ESSAY TO SUBMIT FINAL ESSAY….PLEASE USE THE FEEDBACK FROM THE PROFESSOR ATTACHED BELOW TO MAKE REVISIONS

DISCUSSION POST: Write: (due Thursday, Day 3)
Post your original paragraphs and your final, revised paragraphs in the discussion. Be sure to label them accordingly. Then, in 200 to 300 words, describe your Grammarly experience. Address the following areas:

• Identify the top three issues Grammarly uncovered in your work (e.g. wordiness, passive voice, subject-verb agreement). 
• Were any of those issues surprising?
• Share some of the feedback Grammarly provided as explanations.
• What did you learn? Was it helpful?
• Describe the usefulness of the Grammarly tool.
• Did your writing improve?
• Will you use Grammarly to help you proofread your entire paper? Why or why not?
• Will you use Grammarly for your future class assignments? Why or why not?
• Share any remaining proofreading questions or concerns.