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My midterm essay will be due at the end of Week 5, but for My Week 4 assignment, please draft and submit introductory paragraph for my midterm essay. Intro paragraph: Remember that the parts of an intro paragraph include a hook, preview of upcoming points, and end with a thesis statement. Please remember to use the feedback you received on your thesis statement in discussion this week to inform your thesis statement.

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Working parents should face surmounting challenges and the balancing act between work and childcare is becoming more difficult to manage; thus, child care has emerged as an issue of public concern”

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